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what i wouldn't give
to have my body sink down
into yours, cocooned
in the tumultuous quicksand
of human flesh.

i have never been so moved
as by your touch, the slinking seeping
brush. the universe dispels
and in the absence of everything,
i am less alone
than i have ever been.
cut me slack, i can't remember the last time i wrote a poem. i should be working on NaNoWriMo but my head is currently broken.

way too early to be a midnight something but not really a real poem so it will have to do.
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6:30:09 by ~em-arginated is written with a gentle atmosphere that is beautiful and moving. ( Suggested by Mrs-Freestar-Bul and Featured by thorns )
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Gironimo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I rarely read poems here on DA, especially since English isn't my mother language. But I have to say I really like yours, the words have a beautiful harmony when reading them out loud.
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em-arginated Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, and for taking the time to read! (:
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MentlegenJack Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I would have sex with someone while reading this out loud to them.

Beautiful.
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em-arginated Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013   Writer
haha i feel like a creep but i have to say this is the best compliment ever i think
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MentlegenJack Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hah. I thought so.
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em-arginated Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha no worries!
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vespera Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh this is lovely!
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em-arginated Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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